Your content doesn't lack excellence, but I do have one critique to your video. You could have included more of a Variety of pictures.
I really enjoyed your reflection on Fenn. I found it very interesting that many of our experiences have been quite similar. It would have been nice if you had added a few more pictures, but overall, the video was great.
Great post Kevin. I love how you wind the aspect of family and trust into this post. You make it seem like you are abandoned before coming to Fenn, but now you have finally found home.
It was great hearing about the experience of someone who was not here from the beginning, and how you were able to fit into a well established class. There were great pictures to back up your essay.
It was a really good video. I really enjoyed hearing about some of the experiances that you have had hear. Overall good job.
This is one of the more reflective and philosophical video essays, and it captures your experience with a sincere and calm voice of a thoughtful and engaged student. I agree that it could have used more images and video--and maybe some background music--but the essay is a wonderful exploration of your experience with just enough specific detail to bolster your thoughts. Nice work. It has been a true heroes' journey for you this year!